I was finally able to run the demo without crashing and I'm so glad. It's fantastic! It looks like the full game is going to expand on this snippet in wonderful ways and I can't wait. I'm a sucker for visually adept storytelling and the game has a quirky, appealing movement to it. True pacing and arcs and that's tricky to pull off when the presentation is so abstract.
I don't want to repeat everything I said in the video, so I'll just say I think you notably achieved whatever you set out to accomplish here in terms of player experience and in the translation of the stories that inspired it. It's just plain fun and it's just plain good and I wish you all the best of luck with the release!